McClain Beach
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(02-24-2014, 11:43 PM)71degrees Wrote:  McClain Beach

This woman, my wife;
she is near Superior water

Shoaling waves slide
up the beach face, stopping
just short of her bare feet

I fall more in love with
each spilling break.

At the end of the first stanza there is no full stop yet the second stanza begins with a capital letter, is this meant?
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McClain Beach - by 71degrees - 02-24-2014, 11:43 PM
RE: McClain Beach - by gravity1665 - 02-25-2014, 02:40 AM
RE: McClain Beach - by 71degrees - 02-25-2014, 09:29 AM
RE: McClain Beach - by geoff - 02-25-2014, 10:26 AM
RE: McClain Beach - by 71degrees - 02-27-2014, 05:12 AM
RE: McClain Beach - by tomoffing - 02-28-2014, 07:25 AM
RE: McClain Beach - by 71degrees - 02-28-2014, 02:07 PM
RE: McClain Beach - by Erthona - 02-28-2014, 10:11 AM
RE: McClain Beach - by tomoffing - 03-01-2014, 09:35 AM



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