02-24-2014, 07:39 AM
(02-23-2014, 12:38 PM)Jetz Wrote: The WallI was mistakenly waiting for a rhyme at the end. Woe is me. Try to give these run through before you post them. Some mistakes are inevitable despite how many time you re-read, and others are completely visible. :]
She looked for the writing
but only a few letters were visable visible
That damn clock commandeered
so much space
and time
without rhyme
though always a reason
no matter the season I think these two are unnecessary lines.
The incessant tic toc
of that fuckin' clock
She'd love to
take a rock
to that God damn clock
but then
there'd be that damn writing.
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And why not just burn the wall?
I'll be there in a minute.

