02-23-2014, 05:07 PM
Hi, Jetz,
I'm enjoying this. Nice use of title and play on cliche. God being capitalized seems a little off to me.
Thanks for the read.
I'm enjoying this. Nice use of title and play on cliche. God being capitalized seems a little off to me.
Thanks for the read.
(02-23-2014, 12:38 PM)Jetz Wrote: The Wall
She looked for the writing
but only a few letters were visable
That damn clock commandeered
so much space
and time
without rhyme
though always a reason
no matter the season
The incessant tic toc
of that fuckin' clock
She'd love to
take a rock
to that God damn clock
but then
there'd be that damn writing.
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