Cocktail Edit1.0. For ellajam mostly

[tectak]

i'm not actually sure how to crit this one tom. (what's new you may ask)
is she playing with it or cutting the bugger off

is hrondelle's meaning [swallow]? i ask because of [swallow] which follows it.

i'm out on this one, which doesn't mean it's bad, it just means i'm seeing too much to choose just one avenue of thought.

Just a brief encounter in a late open hotel bar. I'm too old for this and almost got er..suckered. And what do you know, she was called Marguerita!
Yes, a play on swallow...it entered my fantasising. Tit wouldn't do it, in spite of erthona's obsessional transference of his thoughts on to mine
Best,
Tectak
(Back next Tuesday)