i'm not actually sure how to crit this one tom. (what's new you may ask)
is she playing with it or cutting the bugger off
is hrondelle's meaning [swallow]? i ask because of [swallow] which follows it.
i'm out on this one, which doesn't mean it's bad, it just means i'm seeing too much to choose just one avenue of thought.
is she playing with it or cutting the bugger off
is hrondelle's meaning [swallow]? i ask because of [swallow] which follows it.
i'm out on this one, which doesn't mean it's bad, it just means i'm seeing too much to choose just one avenue of thought.