Insanity

Insanity

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#15

02-18-2014, 02:34 AM

Is the crazy syntax, grammar, and style of the poem a reference to the subject of insansity? Even it is is, it could use flow to read better. I'd suggest changing 1 to one, and glue the commas back on, they are very distracting.

*Warning: blatant tomfoolery above this line

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Insanity - by Poetborn - 09-03-2013, 04:11 AM

RE: Insanity - by Malu - 10-18-2013, 05:11 AM

RE: Insanity - by FayandFire - 10-18-2013, 10:34 AM

RE: Insanity - by Viktor Vaughn - 10-18-2013, 05:36 PM

RE: Insanity - by tectak - 10-18-2013, 06:28 PM

RE: Insanity - by nhanna1223 - 02-04-2014, 11:17 AM

RE: Insanity - by billy - 02-04-2014, 12:03 PM

RE: Insanity - by shenaz - 02-07-2014, 05:14 AM

RE: Insanity - by ralex003 - 02-07-2014, 10:49 AM

RE: Insanity - by Lisa - 02-07-2014, 08:21 PM

RE: Insanity - by Bart_Bowen - 02-09-2014, 04:08 AM

RE: Insanity - by shemthepenman - 02-09-2014, 06:03 AM

RE: Insanity - by alatos - 02-09-2014, 12:47 PM

RE: Insanity - by Sheep - 02-11-2014, 06:53 PM

RE: Insanity - by kindofahippy - 02-18-2014, 02:34 AM

RE: Insanity - by sheepy - 02-21-2014, 09:29 AM

RE: Insanity - by Jetz - 02-23-2014, 12:37 PM

RE: Insanity - by Camels - 02-25-2014, 07:04 PM

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