02-17-2014, 08:41 AM
(02-11-2014, 12:14 AM)alatos Wrote: Better raw the taste of vision-I have an aversion to poems that seek to preach at me. I like to know how others see the world, but I like to work it out for myself, from their writing. Give me implicit, rather than explicit.
perception, unrefined.
Yield to imprecision.
Do not distill the mind.
Make living your ambition:
leave all the rest behind.
If I can trust the writer, I will probably believe their words - here, I don't trust, maybe because of the unattractive synesthesia, maybe because I doubt that perception can ever be unrefined.
