Seraph's cry
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I took a long time to think about, and it took a few tries but I worked out (what I hope to be) a thoughtful edit.
Thank all of you so much for all the help! It has been a joy working through this poem.
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Seraph's cry - by Mungo man - 01-04-2014, 11:00 AM
RE: Seraph's cry - by SilverMire - 01-04-2014, 11:05 AM
RE: Seraph's cry - by heslopian - 01-14-2014, 08:19 AM
RE: Seraph's cry - by DonMar - 01-17-2014, 09:57 PM
RE: Seraph's cry - by Erthona - 01-18-2014, 10:41 PM
RE: Seraph's cry - by DonMar - 01-18-2014, 11:09 PM
RE: Seraph's cry - by Erthona - 01-19-2014, 12:08 PM
RE: Seraph's cry - by DonMar - 01-19-2014, 07:30 PM
RE: Seraph's cry - by Erthona - 01-20-2014, 02:01 AM
RE: Seraph's cry - by milo - 01-20-2014, 02:07 AM
RE: Seraph's cry - by newsclippings - 01-21-2014, 03:11 AM
RE: Seraph's cry - by Mungo man - 02-17-2014, 06:19 AM



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