A woman's Love

[billy]

it felt a bit wordy in places, and in all honesty i didn't feel a lot of emotion in it. (though i did get a laugh from the putt you down part)

thanks for the read dale.

To many aches in this body,
too much distance in this abode,
too long hanging on this edge,
has broken me until I’m whole. as in when you're in love you share yourself? at first it didn't work for me but it does now.

Can you feel my love, though distance? through distance or though distant?
yours I can’t, although you say,
your love for me is ever subtle,
while my life fades away.

Love, the cut of a paper, why not just [Love, a paper cut]
though many more times as deep, a bit wordy
deep freeze-dried, un-cried tears,
are the only kind you’ll weep.

What is it, that you carry,
from the trial of untried paths?
Me you keep from wandering off,
a nettles sting, sadistic staff. staff or stuff?

In the silence of our madness,
not a movement, not a creep.
My strong steed you’ve broke’ your leg,
I do the deed, put you to sleep. i don't know why but this part made me laugh.

Can you sense me spiral down?
A falcon that was once a dove:
incognito, I am falling,
savor it, I steal your love? this verse is a bit cheesy but i like it for that reason. love and the lack of it can be that way at times