A woman's Love

[newsclippings]

To many aches in this body, too?
too much distance in this abode,
too long hanging on this edge,
has broken me until I’m whole.

Can you feel my love, though distance?through?
yours I can’t, although you say,
your love for me is ever subtle,
while my life fades away. The say and away rhyme feels cheap. Purposely?

Love, the cut of a paper,
though many more times as deep, word clutter
deep freeze-dried, un-cried tears,
are the only kind you’ll weep. another weird rhyme

What is it, that you carry,
from the trial of untried paths?
Me you keep from wandering off,
a nettles sting, sadistic staff.

In the silence of our madness,
not a movement, not a creep.
My strong steed you’ve broke’ your leg,
I do the deed, put you to sleep.

Can you sense me spiral down?
A falcon that was once a dove:
incognito, I am falling,
savor it, I steal your love?

Happy Valentine's Day?

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The last three stanzas are much better than the first three. I'd like to see how you respond first before I continue on with my opinions.

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Also why isn't "woman's" capitalized?