A world full of people

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A world full of people

StevenA
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02-13-2014, 12:12 PM

(02-05-2014, 10:29 AM)KnightPoems Wrote: On line 16, you may want to consider deleting the "Yeah" I think it takes away from the beauty of your poem.

Yeah, I took it out and changed it a bit. Thanks.

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A world full of people - by StevenA - 02-05-2014, 08:31 AM

RE: A world full of people - by KnightPoems - 02-05-2014, 10:29 AM

RE: A world full of people - by StevenA - 02-13-2014, 12:12 PM

RE: A world full of people - by Love - 02-13-2014, 01:50 PM

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