triolet

triolet

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02-12-2014, 01:17 PM

Wonderful waltz-y rhythm. I liked how you managed to not make "I met the reason of my heart" as repetitive as it could have so easily been by making them into a bridge between two lines instead of an anchor purely for structure.

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triolet - by Arachnid_Poet - 02-12-2014, 08:29 AM

RE: triolet - by Leanne - 02-12-2014, 08:42 AM

RE: triolet - by Arachnid_Poet - 02-12-2014, 09:04 AM

RE: triolet - by Leanne - 02-12-2014, 09:28 AM

RE: triolet - by Arachnid_Poet - 02-12-2014, 09:42 AM

RE: triolet - by Leanne - 02-12-2014, 11:54 AM

RE: triolet - by Sheep - 02-12-2014, 01:17 PM

RE: triolet - by Arachnid_Poet - 02-12-2014, 04:08 PM

RE: triolet - by visualcondyle - 02-13-2014, 02:37 AM

RE: triolet - by Arachnid_Poet - 02-13-2014, 06:53 AM

RE: triolet - by milo - 02-17-2014, 12:09 PM

RE: triolet - by kindofahippy - 02-18-2014, 02:16 AM

RE: triolet - by milo - 02-18-2014, 02:28 AM

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