The Little Things
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Another Revision of "The Little Things"

Vanishing Point

It looks like a painting,
what an artist might see:

an aging couple, at a little cafe, tiny
tables, the man, his white hair, thinning,
thick glasses, his empty plate pushed
to the middle of the table; he is eating
cherry pie, holding his fork in his left hand
like a music baton, accessible

the smallish woman across from him,
her hair also white, a soft hat on,
like a little bird in a nest; she is sipping
chicken soup; her water glass, ice half-
melted; she seems to be waiting for something
small, a bit of conversation

the man’s free right hand touches
the woman’s left index finger,
a small gesture; in a few minutes,
they will enter a different landscape,
their natural depth borrowed
from each other’s perspective
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The Little Things - by 71degrees - 02-03-2014, 02:37 AM
RE: The Little Things - by Erthona - 02-03-2014, 04:52 AM
RE: The Little Things - by 71degrees - 02-04-2014, 02:18 AM
RE: The Little Things - by just mercedes - 02-09-2014, 10:00 AM
RE: The Little Things - by Humbert - 02-03-2014, 03:05 PM
RE: The Little Things - by makeshift - 02-07-2014, 03:50 PM
RE: The Little Things - by 71degrees - 02-09-2014, 12:59 AM
RE: The Little Things - by justcloudy - 02-09-2014, 09:19 AM
RE: The Little Things - by 71degrees - 02-11-2014, 01:12 AM
RE: The Little Things - by visualcondyle - 02-15-2014, 05:20 AM
RE: The Little Things - by 71degrees - 02-15-2014, 12:45 PM



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