Virtuality

Virtuality

Lock Key
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02-10-2014, 03:38 AM

This is the over all feeling I got from your poem. One of isolation and solitude. I was left with an incomplete feeling, however if you took time to finish this with a punctuation that gives the reader a true feeling of remorse, then it would be satisfying.

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Virtuality - by shenaz - 02-07-2014, 05:11 AM

RE: Virtuality - by cidermaid - 02-08-2014, 06:35 PM

RE: Virtuality - by shenaz - 02-09-2014, 02:54 AM

RE: Virtuality - by shemthepenman - 02-08-2014, 09:31 PM

RE: Virtuality - by Lock Key - 02-10-2014, 03:38 AM

RE: Virtuality - by alatos - 02-10-2014, 04:52 AM

RE: Virtuality - by shenaz - 02-11-2014, 05:34 AM

RE: Virtuality - by kindofahippy - 02-19-2014, 05:44 AM

RE: Virtuality - by just mercedes - 02-19-2014, 07:06 AM

RE: Virtuality - by shenaz - 02-20-2014, 02:24 AM

RE: Virtuality - by Am I A Poet? - 04-18-2014, 11:35 AM

RE: Virtuality - by Robert9614 - 04-22-2014, 06:50 AM

RE: Virtuality - by ralex003 - 04-25-2014, 09:59 AM

RE: Virtuality - by shenaz - 04-25-2014, 06:14 PM

RE: Virtuality - by Willpark - 04-28-2014, 11:15 AM

RE: Virtuality - by shenaz - 04-28-2014, 10:14 PM

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