Damaged.
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A poem is more than just making the words fit in the right places, or following a rhythm that rhymes every line. A poem hits the reader with your feelings and personal experience so that they can relate to it, and you have done just that with "Damaged"
If, however you are going to write more poems and prose. Then you need to work on how to structure your poem into stanza style.


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Damaged. - by TheNotoriousLmc - 07-16-2013, 12:10 PM
RE: Damaged. - by PAX - 02-09-2014, 10:37 AM
RE: Damaged. - by Lock Key - 02-09-2014, 12:21 PM
RE: Damaged. - by Sheep - 02-11-2014, 06:59 PM
RE: Damaged. - by ChristopherSea - 02-11-2014, 08:50 PM
RE: Damaged. - by 5th Flow Boy - 02-17-2014, 02:19 PM
RE: Damaged. - by kindofahippy - 02-18-2014, 02:07 AM
RE: Damaged. - by DobbysSockk - 03-15-2014, 07:42 PM
RE: Damaged. - by MadisonDiem - 03-16-2014, 08:49 AM
RE: Damaged. - by Hermit - 03-16-2014, 01:10 PM
RE: Damaged. - by WordJunky - 03-16-2014, 08:16 PM
RE: Damaged. - by denniswilson - 04-07-2014, 05:34 AM
RE: Damaged. - by Thoughtjotter - 04-07-2014, 02:28 PM



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