02-07-2014, 06:28 PM
A decent poem, but for me it could lose the two lines
"My favorite music plays right beside my ear,
and I am quick to take its advice."
and not lose anything Or at least not much. If you think about it awhile you can see how it might apply, but to me that is a distraction, and one can get the same idea without it. I think the dichotomy between the internal versus the externally created self image is pretty clear.
Dale
"My favorite music plays right beside my ear,
and I am quick to take its advice."
and not lose anything Or at least not much. If you think about it awhile you can see how it might apply, but to me that is a distraction, and one can get the same idea without it. I think the dichotomy between the internal versus the externally created self image is pretty clear.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.