View from a College Window

[billy]

i liked this a lot.
it has that bored as fuck feeling we get when we daydream
any edit it needs need only be slight.
thanks for the read jack.

A dirty window blocks the wind and rain,
but through it I see their bleak effects
on houses and trees and lawn arrangements.
A rotten rusting white metal chair, this line feels a bit too full
beside its fellows of brotherly creed. not sure creed works too well a suggestion would be [need]
Around a central table, I assume, i'm not sure the [i assume] is needed. i'm able to see the assumption because of the obscured view in the next line.
though large and ragged trees obscure my view.
Appropriately sad, I think, a lawn make the thought stand out maybe use italics.
for entertaining guests in summer or
the spring, now wilting darkly in the rain.