02-07-2014, 05:14 AM
(09-03-2013, 04:11 AM)Poetborn Wrote: Insanity now- a -days have become 1 with humanityPoetborn you need to address the issue of punctuation. If it was intentional, then some footnotes will be necessary to explain the absence.
,and our friend morals well he has lost his very gravity
But Insanity is steadily grabbing we
, but we still nourish the deep pains
Often thinking we have ………. Well that we have gained our true friend sanity,but in fact its more delusions never sanity
,from our very own friend insanity
Bi aori adan fi sebo, ao lo obe

