Trumpet Blasts

[Elezaron]

I can't feel any real timing or cadence in this. But I also can't hear the melody in your head. Music is very forgiving..some things sound better sung with music than they sound recited without it.

Overall, I think it has possibilities. Thanks, and I hope this is helpful.
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thanks, man. The Esoteric stuff is a little personal rather than relate-able. kennywood is an amusement park in Pittsburgh where i grew up, and shadow is the name of my dog when I was young. I really appreciate the feedback.