02-04-2014, 09:20 AM
(02-03-2014, 02:59 PM)DominoMan Wrote: Hmmm I like it, but at some point after the first few verses the words dont seem to flow easily. I mean I just really liked how the meaning and the flow seemed to go well together.Could you quote where the flow seems forced, or off please?
It has a kind of lyrical feel to it which i can relate to, being a musician myself and trying to write poetry.