02-02-2014, 04:14 AM
This reminds me very much of visiting my mother in the Nursing Home - I think they must be the same, world-wide, and the complex emotions they evoke must spring from the same mixture of guilt, love and hopelessness.
The only real question I want to ask about your poem - look at your use of adjectives. Are you using too many?
The only real question I want to ask about your poem - look at your use of adjectives. Are you using too many?