02-01-2014, 07:57 PM
I (really) like the use of consonance + alliteration in the "s" and "l" but at the same time I find "like" in L3 a little jarring for the same reasons.
Maybe it is intentional to have [Love, like] that big of an impact from this device but I find it a little too disenchanting for my taste. :p
toning it down to something like ", so like" or just cutting the "like" out entirely would might soothe my fragile soul in this instance. :p
I am jealous of how well it all works. :p
Maybe it is intentional to have [Love, like] that big of an impact from this device but I find it a little too disenchanting for my taste. :p
toning it down to something like ", so like" or just cutting the "like" out entirely would might soothe my fragile soul in this instance. :p
I am jealous of how well it all works. :p