01-31-2014, 11:13 PM
Keith, I like this poem. It tells a good story. Please change "sitting to long" to "sitting too long"...obsessive about those little things...but overall BRILLIANT!! (see you got all caps!)
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HMS Glory
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RE: HMS Glory - by Leanne - 01-30-2014, 11:05 AM
RE: HMS Glory - by Keith - 02-01-2014, 06:05 AM
RE: HMS Glory - by nicksherman - 01-31-2014, 02:11 AM
RE: HMS Glory - by justcloudy - 01-31-2014, 08:54 AM
RE: HMS Glory - by billy - 01-31-2014, 09:53 AM
RE: HMS Glory - by Keith - 02-01-2014, 06:38 AM
RE: HMS Glory - by billy - 02-01-2014, 09:33 AM
RE: HMS Glory - by Keith - 02-01-2014, 09:37 AM
RE: HMS Glory - by Brownlie - 01-31-2014, 10:18 AM
RE: HMS Glory - by gslegrá - 01-31-2014, 11:13 PM
RE: HMS Glory - by justcloudy - 02-01-2014, 06:22 AM
RE: HMS Glory - by justcloudy - 02-01-2014, 07:02 AM
RE: HMS Glory - by Keith - 02-01-2014, 09:28 AM
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