01-31-2014, 05:10 AM
(01-31-2014, 04:49 AM)trueenigma Wrote: Jm, are you going to edit your couplet? Or do you want to give someone else a crack at it?I thought I'd deleted it - a quick write, then I realized I'd got the whole thing wrong according to your rules, and it was such a negative moan anyway. Won't get to it til later today - I shall return!
There is no rush of course, if indeed you are planning on revising.
I wrote a Heroic Crown once, and the first sonnet consisted of the first lines of all the following sonnets.
