The Waves of Peace

[Brownlie]

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Waves of peace rush over me.

Now I sit, drenched in love and consolation.



God’s desire to soak my soul in Love, like a sponge till it drips with His grace,

spills out, uncontrollably;

dousing the fire of my will;

replacing it with the peace only known,

of His Love.



Silently, I drown in Full, Active Participation.

Aware for an instant at least.

It is hard for me to properly comment on these poems at the moment but I think I can give you some meaningful comments. I'm not sure your using the semicolon right. From my understanding both clauses surrounding the semicolon need to be independent. You may also benefit from looking at some comma rules and how people have used enjambment. Hope that helps.