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HMS Glory
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01-31-2014, 02:11 AM
I really enjoyed this, and though I'd like to offer more of a critique, there just isn't much I'd change. My only suggestion would be that the second to last stanza seems to rhyme, whereas, the rest do not. It kind of throws of the flow of the poem a bit. It's nitpicky, but that's all I could come up with as a critique because it's so good.
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RE: HMS Glory - by Leanne - 01-30-2014, 11:05 AM
RE: HMS Glory - by Keith - 02-01-2014, 06:05 AM
RE: HMS Glory - by nicksherman - 01-31-2014, 02:11 AM
RE: HMS Glory - by justcloudy - 01-31-2014, 08:54 AM
RE: HMS Glory - by billy - 01-31-2014, 09:53 AM
RE: HMS Glory - by Keith - 02-01-2014, 06:38 AM
RE: HMS Glory - by billy - 02-01-2014, 09:33 AM
RE: HMS Glory - by Keith - 02-01-2014, 09:37 AM
RE: HMS Glory - by Brownlie - 01-31-2014, 10:18 AM
RE: HMS Glory - by gslegrá - 01-31-2014, 11:13 PM
RE: HMS Glory - by justcloudy - 02-01-2014, 06:22 AM
RE: HMS Glory - by justcloudy - 02-01-2014, 07:02 AM
RE: HMS Glory - by Keith - 02-01-2014, 09:28 AM
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