01-30-2014, 03:12 AM
Ha, I have those then and now at the same time problems, drives readers crazy even though it's clear to me. 
What I think about
sometimes
are the box cars
that were coupling
What I think about
sometimes
are the box cars
that coupled
What I think about
sometimes
are the box cars
as they coupled
What I think about
sometimes
is how the box cars
coupled
What I think about
sometimes
is those box cars
coupled
Good luck, figure out how to keep your sound.
What I think about
sometimes
are the box cars
that were coupling
What I think about
sometimes
are the box cars
that coupled
What I think about
sometimes
are the box cars
as they coupled
What I think about
sometimes
is how the box cars
coupled
What I think about
sometimes
is those box cars
coupled
Good luck, figure out how to keep your sound.
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