Women's Ward

[Leanne]

Linda, I have very little but praise to offer for this. Each of these images carries very specific, very intense emotions. My only small criticisms are with the mechanics: your end punctuation could do with some variation as there are a lot of places that you've used commas where a semi-colon or an em-dash would serve better. Also, "banal niceties" is a bit on the redundant side -- maybe just "banalities".

I very much enjoyed this, thank you!