Star Crossed Inuit

[milo]

No, you have to get it on pay-per-view in the "wot people think" section.

Ah, yes, the one with "did write".

I think it may be metrically and historically inaccurate.

honestly I have no idea. "did write" seems to be an iamb though.

Did write is metrically correct (though a trochee) but an obvious act of.desperation. you don't really see the old "did (verb)" in sonnets anymore.

The metrical problems are elsewhere.

Did write is a more grotesque version of leannes had have and my "and so he"

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Just went back and looked, you used "did write" as an iamb, though the meter really isn't the concern.