Defiant Articles (edit 1)

[tomoffing]

Thanks all,

I'm uncomfortable with the final stanza too. I want the collective voice of the objects (or the people behind them if you will) but definitely not the preachy aspect.

An earlier edit closes with the same refrain,

"We are not our names"

Any thoughts on whether that would lighten it Cloudy?

Noted on the articles Erthona, I've been fighting with the rhythm in that stanza so I'll work on getting it fixed overall.

Thanks all, t