01-25-2014, 01:28 AM
I agree with billy's post, in that your poem would be stronger if some of the repetitive words were edited. But, you do a good job of showing how impactful our physical appearance can be on the rest of our life, regardless of how well we're doing in other aspects.
I really like "I can't be in group photos; because I am the least beautiful friend." It goes a bit deeper by showing how relationships are being affected. Being envious of or not good enough for others.
I really like "I can't be in group photos; because I am the least beautiful friend." It goes a bit deeper by showing how relationships are being affected. Being envious of or not good enough for others.

