01-24-2014, 03:34 AM
Thanks guys... I do need to change S1.
Chris,
I was trying to invoke a feeling at a point of time. You are standing in front of someone about to be reprimanded and that someone is evidently very upset at you. There is (or can be) a time when that person stares you down. You stand there and try to imagine what he wants to say and what violent action he wants to pursue. That is what my S2 about.
Chris,
I was trying to invoke a feeling at a point of time. You are standing in front of someone about to be reprimanded and that someone is evidently very upset at you. There is (or can be) a time when that person stares you down. You stand there and try to imagine what he wants to say and what violent action he wants to pursue. That is what my S2 about.