01-24-2014, 01:24 AM
I like the idea and image of two steaming pots of porridge as angry eyes. I am having more difficuty reconciling:
Words emanating
And punches projecting.
Not heard, not felt
But understood.
Wouldn't the words have to be either heard or felt to be understood? I would re-examine this stanza. Cheers/Chris
Words emanating
And punches projecting.
Not heard, not felt
But understood.
Wouldn't the words have to be either heard or felt to be understood? I would re-examine this stanza. Cheers/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris