Poem #5
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I thought it was a small child as he/she was "Stared down By two big pots Of boiling porridge." As though these pots were on the table and the child was looking up at them. This had already put me i the wrong frame of mind to read the next two stanzas as written.
Overall, I think the piece is just too ambiguous.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Poem #5 - by oxomiya - 01-19-2014, 02:40 AM
RE: Poem #5 - by penguingina - 01-22-2014, 02:13 PM
RE: Poem #5 - by oxomiya - 01-23-2014, 08:56 PM
RE: Poem #5 - by Erthona - 01-23-2014, 11:11 PM
RE: Poem #5 - by ellajam - 01-24-2014, 01:07 AM
RE: Poem #5 - by ChristopherSea - 01-24-2014, 01:24 AM
RE: Poem #5 - by oxomiya - 01-24-2014, 03:34 AM
RE: Poem #5 - by StevenA - 02-05-2014, 09:25 AM
RE: Poem #5 - by Sheep - 02-11-2014, 06:57 PM
RE: Poem #5 - by ChristopherSea - 02-11-2014, 08:28 PM
RE: Poem #5 - by Thatonegirl - 02-23-2014, 09:02 AM
RE: Poem #5 - by AngelOfFire - 02-26-2014, 04:07 AM
RE: Poem #5 - by Bahdriel - 02-27-2014, 01:22 AM



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