01-23-2014, 07:44 PM
A couple of articles appear to be missing in stanza 2 
Does palm and hand rhyme from where you are from, or was that just a Freudian slip
Those things aside, a very concise poem.
Dale

Does palm and hand rhyme from where you are from, or was that just a Freudian slip

Those things aside, a very concise poem.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.

