01-22-2014, 07:41 PM
It is a pretty good sonnet, of course the first letter of each line is not capped, so points must be taken off, as we all know it is a rule of poetry. I do like Saints being compared to crackers. Although I guess most Saints were crackers.
My highest praise is I hardly noticed this was a sonnet.
And now for the dig for no achievement can be left without a bucket of rust.
Leanne and her moldy corset soared above the storm,
"I need more air to breathe she like Byron pined"
the muse or the head to Sepsis sacrifice,
the answer on the wind "in time", she said, "in time"!
Always with love,
Dale
My highest praise is I hardly noticed this was a sonnet.
And now for the dig for no achievement can be left without a bucket of rust.
Leanne and her moldy corset soared above the storm,
"I need more air to breathe she like Byron pined"
the muse or the head to Sepsis sacrifice,
the answer on the wind "in time", she said, "in time"!
Always with love,
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.