01-22-2014, 12:39 AM
Kind of disjointed and lacking in clarity. Need to reinsert the pronouns.
I was Hiding in the house,
that I had lived in for many years.
Kind of difficult to make sense out of otherwise.
Dale
I was Hiding in the house,
that I had lived in for many years.
Kind of difficult to make sense out of otherwise.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.