The Tales We Tell

[Brownlie]

Brownlie,

Thank you for your comment, however I you need to be more specific about which "adjectives are bothering you."

"let events and images describe themselves so the reader can discover the underlying themes."

That's a tad vague, as this is written in the first person narrative what you are suggesting, that I change the voice? I don't see that it draws all that many conclusions for the reader, so you will need to be more specific if you want a response, which I would be happy to give once I understand what you mean.

Thanks again,

Dale

I'm not sure what you mean by voice. I assume the term refers to the tone of the speaker. Puffed-up overweening would be an example of too many adjectives. Artery clogging is another example. Thank you for indulging me.