01-21-2014, 09:28 AM
I like the second stanza better the 3rd is still a little eh hopefully someone else will have some really good suggestions
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Fatherhood (Edit 3) - by Blake - 01-21-2014, 07:50 AM
RE: Fatherhood - by Blake - 01-21-2014, 08:16 AM
RE: Fatherhood - by kingmicahde - 01-21-2014, 08:48 AM
RE: Fatherhood - by Blake - 01-21-2014, 09:11 AM
RE: Fatherhood (Edit 1) - by kingmicahde - 01-21-2014, 09:28 AM
RE: Fatherhood (Edit 2) - by Blake - 01-22-2014, 12:59 AM
RE: Fatherhood (Edit 2) - by ellajam - 01-22-2014, 02:40 AM
RE: Fatherhood (Edit 3) - by Blake - 01-22-2014, 04:21 AM
RE: Fatherhood (Edit 3) - by clemonz - 01-22-2014, 04:48 AM
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