01-20-2014, 08:21 AM
Hi ella,
I like the feel of this one. It's reads to me like a photo, which I think is what you wanted. A small moment caught in time, a still-life of the modern world. The teapot overturned suggest something urgent or calamitous has just happened, hence the unlocked house / open door. I do take issue with the title though. I only realized that's the kind of "open" you mean as I wrote that. Up to now I thought it was open house as in when people are trying to sell their home and have 3 hours on Sunday when it's open to viewers. The double meaning could work I guess, but it's mostly just confusing. Your call.
Thanks for sharing.
-justcloudy
I like the feel of this one. It's reads to me like a photo, which I think is what you wanted. A small moment caught in time, a still-life of the modern world. The teapot overturned suggest something urgent or calamitous has just happened, hence the unlocked house / open door. I do take issue with the title though. I only realized that's the kind of "open" you mean as I wrote that. Up to now I thought it was open house as in when people are trying to sell their home and have 3 hours on Sunday when it's open to viewers. The double meaning could work I guess, but it's mostly just confusing. Your call.
Thanks for sharing.
-justcloudy
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