01-18-2014, 11:42 PM
There's much to be said for brevity. 
The more I read these brief lines, the more the images expand in my imagination. Interesting.
Donna
The more I read these brief lines, the more the images expand in my imagination. Interesting.
Donna
(01-17-2014, 11:35 PM)oxomiya Wrote: It is alive.
Not in the womb
But in our hearts.
A cry before the cry
We hear.
Love it is. I'd suggest reversing this line for a more natural sound: 'It is love'.
Honour the Earth. Without it, we'd be nowhere.