Sienna at Burnt Twilight

[ellajam]

I'll concede tumbled is a bit hap-hazarded

I have no problem with the concept, it's the feeling of the word I'm quibbling about. I'm like that with my own poems, attached to or able to detach from certain words in a specific place. It's your poem, your tumble, I'm just voicing where I stand on it. I don't think it's bothering anyone else.

(cheese, crackers and cabernet)