Sienna at Burnt Twilight

[ChristopherSea]

Dale, I am still on your title and first line. Is it night or twilight? If twilight, your light source is the sun and your title stands. However, twilight would then conflict with your darkness of night. If it is night, you should probably change the title to 'Sienna in Burnt Moonlight' or something more apropos. You could 'ghost out' under either light source. However, a single color of light (monochromatic) would be tough to pull off at night. Moon/starlight is white and polychromatic. Some sunsets are heavily hued orange, red, violet, etc, but again not a single monochromatic hue and definitely not a specific wavelength. Nonetheless, it is possible for your spector to ghost out beneath a few rays of a particular color. In this case, you could change the first line to something like: 'In the murk of twilight, I ghost out...' This probably hurts more than helps, but scientific accuracy is important. I will try to get past the title and opening line now!