01-17-2014, 07:52 PM
Hey, Dale, Good Morning.
I have no problem with what you meant with "void", I just thought the word itself landed with a bit of a thud.
I got the sickle of death, then stumbled over tumble. If it's dead does it matter what happens to its body? If its sliced open could we put it back together had it not shattered? I think not. In your note to beaufort you say it was just marked with a sickle. It was marked for death then accidentally fell? No. Maybe I shouldn't be taking tumble as accidentally but I do. Maybe it will fall into place for me.
(and you can have any kind of sandwich you want, just show up for lunch)
I have no problem with what you meant with "void", I just thought the word itself landed with a bit of a thud.
I got the sickle of death, then stumbled over tumble. If it's dead does it matter what happens to its body? If its sliced open could we put it back together had it not shattered? I think not. In your note to beaufort you say it was just marked with a sickle. It was marked for death then accidentally fell? No. Maybe I shouldn't be taking tumble as accidentally but I do. Maybe it will fall into place for me.
(and you can have any kind of sandwich you want, just show up for lunch)
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