Off sick-- edit 2
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The ending really seems to...just stick it. I like it a lot.
On my first read, I thought the speaker was crying uncontrollably and went through a whole box of tissues. Now I'm not sure if she in fact has a cold. I'm think the fact that "scorching days are far from here" means she's physically cold. IDK.

Giant cotton popcorn is hilarious.

Thanks for the read Smile
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Off sick-- edit 2 - by justcloudy - 01-15-2014, 07:21 AM
RE: Off sick - by Blake - 01-15-2014, 07:42 AM
RE: Off sick - by sabbath - 01-15-2014, 02:46 PM
RE: Off sick - by justcloudy - 01-15-2014, 09:26 PM
RE: Off sick - by Wanderbug - 01-16-2014, 05:42 PM
RE: Off sick - by tomoffing - 01-16-2014, 09:48 PM
RE: Off sick-- edit 1 - by justcloudy - 01-16-2014, 11:36 PM
RE: Off sick-- edit 1 - by rowens - 01-16-2014, 11:38 PM
RE: Off sick-- edit 1 - by justcloudy - 01-16-2014, 11:40 PM
RE: Off sick-- edit 1 - by rowens - 01-16-2014, 11:42 PM
RE: Off sick-- edit 1 - by justcloudy - 01-16-2014, 11:44 PM
RE: Off sick-- edit 1 - by rowens - 01-16-2014, 11:48 PM
RE: Off sick-- edit 1 - by justcloudy - 01-17-2014, 12:00 AM
RE: Off sick-- edit 1 - by rowens - 01-17-2014, 12:03 AM
RE: Off sick-- edit 1 - by justcloudy - 01-17-2014, 12:07 AM
RE: Off sick-- edit 1 - by rowens - 01-17-2014, 12:09 AM
RE: Off sick-- edit 2 - by justcloudy - 01-17-2014, 12:26 AM
RE: Off sick-- edit 2 - by rowens - 01-17-2014, 12:50 AM
RE: Off sick-- edit 2 - by justcloudy - 01-17-2014, 01:09 AM
RE: Off sick-- edit 2 - by rowens - 01-17-2014, 01:11 AM
RE: Off sick-- edit 2 - by ThePinsir - 01-17-2014, 01:26 AM
RE: Off sick-- edit 2 - by Blake - 01-17-2014, 02:34 AM
RE: Off sick-- edit 2 - by justcloudy - 01-17-2014, 02:57 AM



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