Escape (a sonnet)
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I edited the first line. I think it's MUCH stronger now. I still need to figure something out with the climate change line. I'll work on it..

Thanks for all the input!
My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings:
Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!
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Messages In This Thread
Escape (a sonnet) - by ThePinsir - 01-11-2014, 06:18 AM
RE: Escape (a sonnet) - by rowens - 01-11-2014, 07:11 AM
RE: Escape (a sonnet) - by billy - 01-11-2014, 10:39 AM
RE: Escape (a sonnet) - by Destructed - 01-11-2014, 02:37 PM
RE: Escape (a sonnet) - by teejai - 01-12-2014, 12:24 PM
RE: Escape (a sonnet) - by tomoffing - 01-13-2014, 05:39 AM
RE: Escape (a sonnet) - by ThePinsir - 01-17-2014, 01:17 AM
RE: Escape (a sonnet) - by cheyrn - 01-17-2014, 10:50 PM



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