Off sick-- edit 2

[tomoffing]

This is a great succinct expression of a mundane but relatable experience.

I went through a full box of tissues today. I think you can do better than went, and not sure full is necessary.
Now giant cotton popcorn overflows genius
a pail-turned-trashcan, resting
where my feet would be if they weren't
curled over orange plush,
twisting around each other, struggling don't think each other adds anything
to keep ten toes from turning
into small frozen cherries, maybe to instead of into. Otherwise lovely.
like the ones my sisters love to eat
on scorching days, beautiful shift in scene, great contrast,
far away from this one. And here a sense of being sorry for oneself. Great stuff.

I thoroughly enjoyed this. Bookmarked for my next illness!!
Thanks.