01-14-2014, 06:24 AM
Very good, this is the kind of poetry I enjoy reading and writing. Strong rhythm, but the rhythm can get lost if the reader doesnt flow into this line correctly:
"of solitude. That was, until,"
Of course when you go back and read it again, having read it before you can easily find the rhythm. Overall I think this is quite a good piece of poetry.
"of solitude. That was, until,"
Of course when you go back and read it again, having read it before you can easily find the rhythm. Overall I think this is quite a good piece of poetry.