01-14-2014, 02:39 AM
When I first began reading I was excited that this may be another rhyming poem (my favorites), but I found that rhymes were only occasionally placed throughout the poem. To me this seemed to break the natural flow.
Of course that may in fact be your chosen form, as alot of us have different writing styles and preferences, but as for my personal preference I would say either stick with the rhyming or remove them all together. It can confuse the reader as to what kind of poem they are reading.
Of course that may in fact be your chosen form, as alot of us have different writing styles and preferences, but as for my personal preference I would say either stick with the rhyming or remove them all together. It can confuse the reader as to what kind of poem they are reading.