Gandhi's shadow-- edit 2
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Thanks rowens for the explanation. I guess I'm a fan of "reckless meanderings". ;p It's really interesting to see someone else describing my poetry, and I like that you're honest about what you see. Thanks a lot.

I appreciate your thoughts ella, thanks. I think you're spot on with the "weave" suggestion, glad you mentioned it. I sometimes feel lost when I edit, but if someone else is learning from my process then hey, that's cool. This one at least seems like a solid step forward, and I'm happy to get your confirmation of that. =]

-justcloudy
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Gandhi's shadow-- edit 2 - by justcloudy - 01-10-2014, 09:07 PM
RE: Gandhi's shadow - by rowens - 01-11-2014, 05:57 AM
RE: Gandhi's shadow - by justcloudy - 01-11-2014, 06:38 AM
RE: Gandhi's shadow - by ChristopherSea - 01-11-2014, 08:58 AM
RE: Gandhi's shadow - by justcloudy - 01-11-2014, 09:22 AM
RE: Gandhi's shadow - by billy - 01-11-2014, 10:20 AM
RE: Gandhi's shadow - by justcloudy - 01-12-2014, 01:13 AM
RE: Gandhi's shadow-- edit 1 - by rowens - 01-12-2014, 07:21 AM
RE: Gandhi's shadow-- edit 1 - by ellajam - 01-13-2014, 01:01 AM
RE: Gandhi's shadow-- edit 1 - by justcloudy - 01-13-2014, 03:24 AM
RE: Gandhi's shadow-- edit 1 - by heslopian - 01-14-2014, 08:27 AM
RE: Gandhi's shadow-- edit 1 - by justcloudy - 01-15-2014, 07:25 AM
RE: Gandhi's shadow-- edit 1 - by oxomiya - 01-17-2014, 01:03 AM



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